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Black Widow--trochee

Black Widow


We made love in the arbour
And loft--out of sight,
Then three times at the harbour
As the day turned night.

Let's go into the parlour
In the candle light,
There's no more time for ardour.
I'm ready to--Bite!

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5/08/2012
Trochee
a/b/a/b
7/5/7/5
Andrea's contest:"Trochee"
*Note: the black widow spider is known for killing and eating her male counterpart after she has exhausted him from all the 'love making'--mating.

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  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:28:00 PM
    DEBORAH, a wonderful congratulations in Andrea's 7/5 TROCHEE contest~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 12:36:00 AM
    Deb, Congrats to you on your win with this awesome write from one old soul to another! LOL... Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "The 7/5 Trochee" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:16:00 PM
    yeow.. love the bite!.. happy congrats, deborah..:) huggs!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/29/2012 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol, thank you nette, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:47:00 PM
    congrats on your win Deb

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/29/2012 10:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Joseph!
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 1:38:00 AM
    Cap'n Deb huge congrats on this voracious win..David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/29/2012 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol, ;-) i'm speechless. thank you David, lol, love ya, cap'n deb
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Yes,I knew about this spider's "fun" mating habits. hahaha. Congratulations. This was one of the cleverest of the entries.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/29/2012 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol, well you said you liked them funny ;-) thanks for the cool contest and my win...i think i understand the meter of it now that its over....maybe you should do it again, lol ;-).. love you bunches,deb
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:16:00 AM
    hey hey hey, a Gorgeous cap'n Deb indeed, you keep hanging around those harbours don't you ha ha ha, love this good luck and thanks for all of your comments....love the pic...David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/14/2012 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL...you know, I just can't help myself! ;) lol...something about the sea, think..lol thank you so much...oh the pic was taken this past Saturday...at my daughter's ...I am a bit camera shy...big hugs, love ya ...cap'n deb
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:43:00 AM
    Ps. Smile ˜ "MmM, 'My Sweeet Love.'" *

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/14/2012 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you John...
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:45:00 AM
    Very entertaining poem sweet lady..Got me smiling :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/14/2012 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...thank you Charma!! how are you?? I've missed you!! big hugs, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:19:00 PM
    An excellent poem for Andrea's contest! I'm especially impressed not only with the witty message, but the incredible rhyme scheme too. Winning wishes for you, Deborah! Love, Carolyn

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/14/2012 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ahhh, thank you so much Carolyn :) Hope all is well with you...big hugs, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:51:00 PM
    This is too good for words, Deb! A sure winner. LOL...I enjoyed the read. I love your new avatar. What a great picture! For some reason, I expected you to be older. I guess because you seem so wise. Thanks for the support and encouraging comments lately. You're a great lady. God bless you. Hugs, Rhonda

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/13/2012 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, some people would probably say...I'm an 'old soul'... ;) lol
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/13/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL....thank you Rhonda...lol, honey I am old!! Old as dirt!! ;) I just refuse to age...LOL...that was taken yesterday...I don't allow pics of me...I usually do the pic taking...;) Big hugs, love ya , deb
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:00:00 PM
    lol, thanks for a chuckle here - must be scary being a male spider. many congrats on all your wins, my friend

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/13/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you jack ;) tee hee...
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 2:37:00 PM
    Cute one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like a winning material..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/13/2012 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ahhh, thank you so much Sara...lol...you are always so welcome...thinking of you~~~ big hugs, love ya, deb
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 7:06:00 PM
    great entry. not just something through together in a hurry.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...thank you John
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 3:23:00 PM
    A lover and a meal all in one..lucky lady...winning wishes for the contest Deb..thanks for your comments on my poems...Love..Joseph

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    indeed lucky lady...lol Thank you Joseph...big hugs...
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Excellent Deborah, wish you luck in contest!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)Mmmm...

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thank you dear Anne Lise!! Bon appetit!! lol , hugs, love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:29:00 AM
    : ) Sexual Cannivalism...interesting! She must be soooo good. : ) Great entry, Andrea will love it! My best wishes. Ruben.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL...indeed!! ;) thank you Ruben...hugs
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 10:29:00 AM
    hope it as a sign, this love making, erotic danger, wow, excellent poem Andrea will just love this, harry

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thank you sooooo much 'arry!!;) big hugs
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:22:00 AM
    You putting out the signals there girl, watch out you may not get another bite ha ha, love it xx

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 5/10/2012 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...thank you ~GG~ ;)
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