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Space Race for the Truth about Self

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Space Race for the Truth about Self

Space age luminosity
Barely there, explorations begun
What machinery could match
Rhythm of the tongue and leaves pointed

Barely there, explorations begun
Hired a bulldozer to banish dust
Rhythm of tongue and leaves pointed
Hushed the vibe of shadows in the deep

Hired a bulldozer to banish dust
Telescopes and rope will marry the deal
Hushed the vibes of shadows in the deep
A priest, a pauper, a wormhole in the stream

Telescopes and rope will marry the deal
What logic concealed face could bury the fate?
A priest, a pauper, a wormhole in the stream
i'm bleeding the coffers for identity

What logic concealed face could bury the fate?
What machinery could match?
I'm bleeding the coffers for identity
Space Age luminosity

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 3:06:00 PM
    Justin good pantoum I like this form..David

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 11:40:00 AM
    This is a cool pantoum - a deep inner-space sort of quantum leap. Space race for the truth about self....indeed.