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Rise to the Top

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Rise to the Top

okay now, I'm getting depressing
I've decided to stop and begin progressing...



I'll look one way as i climb to the top
I'll laugh as I get higher and feel my ears pop

My smile will brighten the world one day
and everyone will look up and they'll say

Who's that girl so valiant and so strong?
Has she been on top of the world for long?

And i'll be gracious, and help them to me
I'll bring them higher so happily

But of course I can't do it alone, I've got someone
Who'll help me, even, else the battle's not won

It's my savior, the Christ, my brother, my all
He's the only one who saved me from that dangerous pitfall


...So come one and all, join me and arise
The stumbling blocks of the world shouldn't be our demise.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:21:00 PM
    You definitely have reached the top,and made me smile and believe,its so nice poem and so very true as well,and thank you for your time and comment, Ivy

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:33:00 PM
    Wonderful testimony Juli-Michelle!!!! Yes Ma'am!! Well Done! Thank you for being about our Father's business! :) and thank you for your kind words, visiting my work...I shall read more of yours...you are very gifted my dear!! big hugs, love ya , deb

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 6/6/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 5:43:00 AM
    A pleasure to read your poetry today Juli-. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 3:54:00 PM
    A strong testimony.