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ACRID SOUL

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ACRID SOUL

HURT (Acrid Soul)

Hurt
Lingers
on her tongue.
Lips unable
to adjust. Prayers be-
came her remedy. Lips
slowly moving; causing her
tongue to breathe yet again. In hopes
of not tasting another acrid
soul as he. Now, oft to the next entree.


Pace, G
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05-07-2012

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 2:25:00 PM
    I am enjoying being introduced to new styles of poetry. Although I have been writing poetry for myriad years, I confess that I am ignorant of all these different styles I am discovering. This is cool; I really dig it :)

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:04:00 AM
    I really like this one.

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    Date: 8/7/2012 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Sakyra!!
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 4:46:00 PM
    G Pace, this is a very nice and moving etheree* for us females, I love the waking up deal.. Now who can ever go back to the same bitter taste. Waking up in the morning to old dreams gets kind of old... thanks God, for all them peeps out there stealing hearts left to right,.. anyways~ Back to your poem, I'm glad she is moving on to another feel, maybe this one will feel a whole lot better. Hip Hip Horay for Prayers... God Bless you...PD

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    Date: 8/7/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..I just love your comments...but no, we shouldn't want to go back to that bitter taste.. :)
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 9:15:00 PM
    It's probably a little late, but I haven't been on here in awhile...Featured poem of the week? 0.o I'm confused >.>

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    Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok..I'll explain.
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 7:42:00 AM
    Simple and clear...pain in poetry. Lovely poem!

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    Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my dearest sweet Doreen!! :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:42:00 PM
    The bitter taste of wasted love gets thrown out with the scraps. To leave a dog beg for a bone and starve to death, perhaps. The winds of change blew up a storm. The winds of change are now the norm.

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    Date: 6/4/2012 9:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!
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    Date: 6/4/2012 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:38:00 PM
    I Felt That One, peirce my Heart. Ouch!!! lovely said. Carma

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    Date: 6/2/2012 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my dear poetess Carma!!!
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:31:00 PM
    Lovely

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    Date: 5/31/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:20:00 PM
    I likeyour poetry and enjoyed...patrick

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    Date: 5/18/2012 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!!
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
    ''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

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    Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hugs!!!
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 6:45:00 PM
    ''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

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    Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:54:00 PM
    that is so deep!

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    Date: 5/10/2012 4:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well thank you Joi for stopping by and sharing with me..please do come back...hugs!!
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Small and strong - - grows always to something BIG ! - Pace G. you are the poet of this big poem, well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

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    Date: 5/9/2012 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love your support Anne!!!
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 11:00:00 AM
    yeow, you make my head spin with this sense of tender angst, pace...you got me right on the first line... grreeat read..;) huggs!

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    Date: 5/9/2012 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sweetheart always!! huggs
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 1:22:00 PM
    You are brave and wrote likewise. Loved always, bl

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    Date: 5/8/2012 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you madam!! I love the comment given,
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:09:00 AM
    First off, very cool title (and thoughts into it), G! Sometimes hurt can definitely do that, leave a bad taste in the mouth but you are so right, prayers can heal-- love how you refer to it as "remedy"! Hopefully she'll taste something sweeter this time around! A loaded write in so few lines, really love this one :D

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    Date: 5/8/2012 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol..Thank you so much for sharing with me. Nikko..hugs
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 9:25:00 AM
    very profoundly penned! Cindy Lu aka Lucinda

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    Date: 5/8/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!! I've missed you.
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Mr. Pace, cool words..David

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    Date: 5/8/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David!!
  1. Date: 5/8/2012 6:00:00 AM
    This is just stunning, I love the idea of prayers being her remedy.. We need these gentle reminders. Thanks G :) Wilma

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    Date: 5/8/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes maam indeed we do!! Thanks for stopping by.
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 6:21:00 PM
    very nice Pace, excellent read. Juanita

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    Date: 5/7/2012 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you madam!!
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