ACRID SOUL by Pace INK-U-SCRIPT

Sakyra V Mance

Date: 7/1/2012 8:04:00 AM

I really like this one.

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot Sakyra!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 4:46:00 PM

G Pace, this is a very nice and moving etheree* for us females, I love the waking up deal.. Now who can ever go back to the same bitter taste. Waking up in the morning to old dreams gets kind of old... thanks God, for all them peeps out there stealing hearts left to right,.. anyways~ Back to your poem, I'm glad she is moving on to another feel, maybe this one will feel a whole lot better. Hip Hip Horay for Prayers... God Bless you...PD

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:07:00 AM

Lol..I just love your comments...but no, we shouldn't want to go back to that bitter taste.. :)

Blake Hannah

Date: 6/26/2012 9:15:00 PM

It's probably a little late, but I haven't been on here in awhile...Featured poem of the week? 0.o I'm confused >.>

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM

Ok..I'll explain.

Doreen Wright

Date: 6/8/2012 7:42:00 AM

Simple and clear...pain in poetry. Lovely poem!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM

Thank you my dearest sweet Doreen!! :)

Date: 6/4/2012 3:42:00 PM

The bitter taste of wasted love gets thrown out with the scraps. To leave a dog beg for a bone and starve to death, perhaps. The winds of change blew up a storm. The winds of change are now the norm.

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 9:05:00 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 9:04:00 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Carma Reed

Date: 6/1/2012 11:38:00 PM

I Felt That One, peirce my Heart. Ouch!!! lovely said. Carma

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:26:00 AM

Thank you my dear poetess Carma!!!

Asheka Collins

Date: 5/31/2012 1:31:00 PM

Lovely

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/31/2012 2:39:00 PM

Thank you dearly!!

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 5/18/2012 8:20:00 PM

I likeyour poetry and enjoyed...patrick

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/18/2012 9:21:00 PM

Thank you so much!!

ismeta -Ivy vresk

Date: 5/14/2012 6:46:00 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM

Hugs!!!

ismeta -Ivy vresk

Date: 5/14/2012 6:45:00 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM

No thank you!!

joi murphy

Date: 5/9/2012 8:54:00 PM

that is so deep!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/10/2012 4:37:00 AM

Well thank you Joi for stopping by and sharing with me..please do come back...hugs!!

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2012 11:13:00 AM

Small and strong - - grows always to something BIG ! - Pace G. you are the poet of this big poem, well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/9/2012 12:53:00 PM

Love your support Anne!!!

nette onclaud

Date: 5/9/2012 11:00:00 AM

yeow, you make my head spin with this sense of tender angst, pace...you got me right on the first line... grreeat read..;) huggs!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/9/2012 12:52:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart always!! huggs

bl devnath

Date: 5/8/2012 1:22:00 PM

You are brave and wrote likewise. Loved always, bl

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/8/2012 2:36:00 PM

Thank you madam!! I love the comment given,

binibining P.iNk

Date: 5/8/2012 10:09:00 AM

First off, very cool title (and thoughts into it), G! Sometimes hurt can definitely do that, leave a bad taste in the mouth but you are so right, prayers can heal-- love how you refer to it as "remedy"! Hopefully she'll taste something sweeter this time around! A loaded write in so few lines, really love this one :D

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/8/2012 12:27:00 PM

lol..Thank you so much for sharing with me. Nikko..hugs

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/8/2012 9:25:00 AM

very profoundly penned! Cindy Lu aka Lucinda

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/8/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thank you!! I've missed you.

David Williams

Date: 5/8/2012 8:33:00 AM

Mr. Pace, cool words..David

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/8/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thanks David!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/8/2012 6:00:00 AM

This is just stunning, I love the idea of prayers being her remedy.. We need these gentle reminders. Thanks G :) Wilma

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/8/2012 6:43:00 AM

Yes maam indeed we do!! Thanks for stopping by.

juanita smalls

Date: 5/7/2012 6:21:00 PM

very nice Pace, excellent read. Juanita

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 7:36:00 PM

Thank you madam!!

Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT

Date: 5/7/2012 5:24:00 PM

This is truly amazing,just spectacular..........WOW...........

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 5:31:00 PM

Thank you dear poet!!

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 5/7/2012 4:26:00 PM

G, this is an awesome right for sure. Good going. Hugs, Gail

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 4:36:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart!!! Hugs

SCRIBE ML

Date: 5/7/2012 2:29:00 PM

Good imagery. Strong message that's well written!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 2:52:00 PM

Thank you sir for always stopping by!! Fam!! lol

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/7/2012 1:32:00 PM

Beautiful and powerful verse! :D Always, Laura

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 2:21:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart!!

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/7/2012 1:08:00 PM

Bravo!! An awsome write Pace...this one is a fav....you peeked into the window of my heart :O well done write....big hugs deb

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 1:10:00 PM

Oh wow...huge smiles over here!!! Hugs...and thanks!!

Catie Lindsey

Date: 5/7/2012 9:54:00 AM

No, he had not an acidic soul. But the heartbreak was a few years ago, and my heart has had time to heal. (But sometimes, it still just hurts a little.) I have been waiting for years now, for something real to come into my life, my heart. But I do like dessert! Hugs, Catie :)

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 2:20:00 PM

Lol!!! Ok...check your soup mail.

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