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Haiku 17 In solemn adoration

incense' scent wafts amongst the silent crowd i sneeze out loud

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Ha! one of those embarrasing yet humourous moments. Sounds familiar.

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 7:33:00 PM

    beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 7:32:00 PM

    beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 9:28:00 AM

    I could imagine this happening!! :D I love the twist at the end, sweet lucky Charma :D! Send you quick soupmail! :D hugs to you sweetie! and thank you for dropping by my poems :D

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:51:00 PM

    I love this one too. you got the juxtaposition down GOOD with this, Charma

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Well express.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:50:00 PM

    :)+:) - like it - well written. - Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:23:00 PM

    :)Well Done Charma! lol big hugs, love ya deb

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:47:00 AM

    AhChoo!!! : ) What a moment, Charmaine! Indeed, an aha-moment! Very nice! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Another good haiku from you Charma.Enjoyed the read.