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Could this be love

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Could this be love

	Could this be love?

A kiss from a will o wisp
Elusive like stars that wink

Billowing like a silk scarf,
Delicately against your skin

Wishing at sunrise to see
It’s colors rustle and captivate

Like winsome eyes on a pillow
Or joyous laughter from a place

Past the shadows that sparkles
With an effervescence of fireflies

Making your toes tingle finally
And you say beautiful, beautiful

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:12:00 PM

    Romantic and sweet. Full of imagery and heart. nice job

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 5:59:00 AM

    A beautifully subtle write, Raskin. Love the imagery! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 10:20:00 AM

    This is certainly the way people feel when love is in the air! Marvelous imagery and language. Well done, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Great passionate work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..The descriptions and creativity of this one is superb...I think that it is one for my favs..Sara

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 6:04:00 AM

    Beautiful :0)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:35:00 AM

    aww.

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 12:43:00 PM

    Sweet and lovely written it is....love...yes it can be. - Well written and I like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 3:06:00 PM

    And beautiful to read this today Raskin.!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 8:57:00 PM

    wow I feel like eating a bowl of ice cream after reading this decadent poem. :)

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 2:17:00 PM

    Really liked the free flow and joyful content of this write Raskin..

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:42:00 AM

    A delightful refreshing poem.Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Raskin reads like love to me..David