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crazy love

  When I am with you,I feel swooned.                                   
  Its true you make my heart go zoomed.
  But never worry my love,
  I expect nothing.
  Just want to love you till I reach our moon.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:56:00 AM

    So sweet and romantic...well written! Hugs

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 10/4/2012 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :)
    Macfarlane Avatar Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 9/28/2012 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And a warm welcome to the soup!
  1. Date: 9/9/2012 10:13:00 PM

    Fun poem. I like the rhymes and the sense that being in love is great regardless of whether the feeling is returned.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 10/4/2012 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 8:33:00 AM

    wow a wonderful feeling in this piece Mad Hu..we all luv that "over the Moon" emotion .. hope u r having a super day luv..

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/26/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks:)
  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:07:00 PM

    ..."Sk8er Boi *.* Dropping A Dime In Sublime To Call Your Line ... 'Hello, Welcome To Love's Moon' *.* I Love It & Twas Very Pleasantly Surprised To Have Found Such 'A Beautiful Girl' *.* Paying My Humble Little Heart A Kind Warm Visit *.* Thank You, 'Precious Beautiful Lady, Luv,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Nice poem. Welcome to poetry soup.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 2:27:00 AM

    i think u have reached moon inspired by this

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:30:00 AM

    Nice write. Well said. Tfs

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:19:00 AM

    Mad, great dedication..David