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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 8:40:00 PM
    Hello Scribe, thank you for thinking my last poem was xool. Stopping by this one again... a nice featured poem... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Very realistic and stark truth poem on the subject of Irresponsible fools.. :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:55:00 AM
    soup mail....

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:17:00 AM
    I actually though the saying was bloods thicker than water well written david scott

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Top Drawer.. truth, you speak so elegantly... blood is so often the last port of call, as they dont always know what best for their young.. bravo... karen

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 1:08:00 AM
    " You nailed It, Marlon...." So Glad I Am Not Alone Family Stabbing You In the back. Awwesooome write Girl! God~Bless.

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:24:00 PM
    :D I'm frankly proud of your poet-awesomesauceness-- :O is that a word? >:) Probably not, but I'll use it anyway. Grand write altogether. - DWB

    Earnings Avatar J. W. M. Earnings
    Date: 5/17/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    XD I meant to say wonderful job. C:
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 2:49:00 PM
    very nice write,,, family is sometimes that way,,, thanks for reading my "M " have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 2:49:00 PM
    very nice write,,, family is sometimes that way,,, thanks for reading my "M " have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 8:25:00 PM
    very nice, but lack of emotion which in no doubt is very hard to do..... btw what did you mean that a a road is never straight? thanks samip

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 2:01:00 PM
    Really nice relation based along with weight. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:38:00 AM
    I am with you on this one, sometimes it's a sad thing to see that those who you're related with are the ones who endanger you, and how ironic that other people have to save you from them-- very unique topic to approach for your etheree, Marlon!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:33:00 PM
    Strong etheree, Marlon. I get the water is thicker than blood reference now. Yeah, keep the burning bush away from kids. It's one thing to raise an enlightened, aware child, and something different when it comes to this. Hiding something can be like lying when it comes to certain things, but pushing it in their face doesn't make it right either.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Amazing word and so powerful. Always, Laura

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 5/7/2012 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:19:00 AM
    wow, what an interesting world to imagine. WE should all be brothers!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Intense feelings displayed. Gives a lot to think about afterward..Fantastic job sir!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:33:00 AM
    Wow Marlon, this is deep man, a wonderful wonderful poem, with a very clear message. harry

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:47:00 PM
    a soul so deep and raging, marlon.. much enjoyed!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:50:00 PM
    Word!! :) You da bomb Another awsome write! big hugs, love ya fam, deb

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Your words Marlon are never to be taken lightly, your a man of many depths, enjoyed your Etheree, hugs vie