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In the light of day


Brave new world, leaves a distant silhouette
Memories drift into space
A lonely planet calls

Hurtled into a flock of hybrid breeds
Melded from man and machine
The weak shall not survive

The cunning and the wise wield their power
Crushing those who stand and fight
Revelling in their greed

Cyber men and women seek out the strong
Molten metal curves and yields
Ensuring a new race

I am here to add intelligence
Giving myself willingly
This is my destiny

© 5/5/2012

For Tracie's contest

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  1. Date: 5/10/2012 7:06:00 PM

    A man for new frontiers congrats David hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 12:00:00 PM

    And intelligence, you share with us as well! Congratulations David....well done!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 11:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:23:00 AM

    :) Congratulations on your win David!!! Well Done!! lol big hugs, love ya...cap'n deb

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Nicely depicted David. Congratulations

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning piece David, love the idea of you being the intelligent one xx

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 4:20:00 PM

    Intrigued to fly within the phrase where poetic cattle come to graze. I cannot eat such acrid hay. When I cannot see in the light of day.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Hi David! I enjoyed your take on Tracie's challenge, very cool how you ended this :D! Go share that intelligence :D! and hmm me, a tease??? What made you say that, I wonder ;p? Enjoy your day, David :D Thanks for dropping by :D

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:53:00 AM

    David, I just love the theme you chose for the contest.. Wishing you the best for Tracie's contest.. Hope your weekend has been a great one :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Thanks so much David!I honestly didn't know!I woll do the needful..Thanks matey!

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:21:00 AM

    wonderful approach to the theme of the contest David.Very nice poem.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:38:00 AM

    The need of time, lovely done, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 9:39:00 AM

    thanks, I knew you were Capricorn!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 8:34:00 PM

    hahahahaha. I LOVE your ending, putting yourself as the genius in their midst. THat was GENIUS, David. LOVE this. How cool that you took it to this level using kimo. (your bday again!!!)

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 5:14:00 PM

    LOL!!! Too funny! Super Souper job! Well done David!! best wishes for the contest! big congrats on all your resent wins!! Bravo!! big hugs, love cap'n deb :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:52:00 PM

    Love this imaginative one, David. Congrats on your wins - especially those outside Soup