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  1. Date: 5/23/2012 1:51:00 PM
    This brought memories to me and touhed my heart." And thank you for your warm comment means alot..... God bless.

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:35:00 PM
    Congratulation on your win and on your healthy grandson. How awesome... it must be so hard to be so far from them! Do you do skype? I have family that do that and I got to see it in action when we were in Nova Scotia. It really helped to keep Grampa connected to the grandbabies. Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 6:20:00 PM
    yessir...another fav wins!! :) Congratulations on your win David!! Well Done...big hugs, love ya Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Congrats David on your special winning poem luv vie

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Congratulations David I imagine you on a white horse and yes when is my first lesson on shape making xx

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 10:53:00 AM
    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 3:43:00 PM
    I read several of your pieces and truly enjoy the way you move from humorous to serious and back again, but this one is my favorite of the bunch.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:20:00 AM
    This is a touching account, David. The white horse reminds me of Peter S. Beagle's "Last Unicorn". "waves crashing at my feet"'s said that they are the flotsam and the jetsam on the ocean. Though your dreams be gone, it has brought you into the realm of poetry...not such a bad place to be! Oh, I wish for you luck and fortune, David! Mikki

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 3:54:00 AM
    This reminds me of divorce oddly. A family torn. The white horse is a icon of rescue, yet here he comes to save you from storms and doesn't make it on time. A home made out of sand it not a sturdy home at all. I don't know, but I would think from a man's view building a home for those he loves is everything, but then finding out it was made of sand, slipping away out of his control would be horrible. No matter what he does or how hard he worked, or patches, it still falls. This is sad to me.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 5:29:00 PM
    Super David!! Absolutely Super!! this is a winner for sure and a fav for me!! big hugs, and good luck in the contest! cap'n deb

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Hi David just like when I'm on the beach at my caravan in rhyl reminds me of when I was a kid in Scarborough lovely write as usual

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 10:07:00 AM
    I'm don't know what a 'kimo' is, but I like what you've done with it!! Terry

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:39:00 AM
    The kimoe is a very expessive form. Love the castle as home image.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 4:35:00 AM
    Don't need to post a picture with these wonderful Kimo's David, i'm sure Gail will love these. harry

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:51:00 AM
    Love the images. Took me back to my childhood. Good Luck