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Death of an Innocent Heart

Death of an Innocent Heart


That day I fell,today I lie six feet under.I thought you was the one when we first met you made me laugh you held me when I cried and now We have grown to far apart to even truly remember what we use to be.Then by sad chance by crushing feet by this deadly curse you left me and that day I felt my heart die.I wonder what I would do next should i had moved on would the pain hurt me more I don't think i can handle it,should i end my life here will i have pain no more.But what lie beyond death how do I not know I will leave this pain.That day i jump off the bridge into the lake that day I let myself be swept away I let myself drown in sorrow and pain.When I am reborn i wish to be free like the bird in the sky like the ocean and streams, never to face what it mean to be a human.Today I die for the lost of my love for you,It is what most call the death of innocent love.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:54:00 PM
    MARCEDIES, CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Mercedies. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:31:00 AM
    CONGRATS ON AN EXCITING WRITE AND SUPER WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:16:00 AM
    Big congrats Mercedies xx

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:39:00 AM
    very good next time write it in poem form so its easy to read imma give this a poem a 6 :-)

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 1:50:00 AM
    really dumbstruck, very nicely written

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 1:29:00 AM
    Wow....Mercedies, so sad and touching poem you write today. - Wish you all the best! - Love sending to you from Anne-Lise