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Below is the poem entitled The Blue Planet which was written by poet Terry L. Allen. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Blue Planet

                    

                                                      a grain of sand's
                                                  quiet passage in time
                                                       the blue planet

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 3:12:00 AM
    Very nice Terry.Enjoyed.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/7/2012 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    With planets, asteroids and such in unimaginable numbers in space the earth is but a grain of sand by comparison. May today be the equal of your favorite treat. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:53:00 AM
    I don't mind your humor at all..that is what makes this bowl of soup fun.. About your haiku.. I'm wondering if that blue planet is earth..lol.. I can see how earth is onlt a tiny dot of sand... any how I like your haiku. Im kind of a rule breaker when it comes to this form... Enjoyed..and have a good night..pd

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/6/2012 1:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This was rather a cosmic statement and a bit way out there for some here but there are a few like us in here thank the Lord that don't live on the surface. Thanks and catch ya later. TLee
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:52:00 PM
    A grain of sand is quite literal, as the most common element on the surface is silica, the major component of most sand. But still a nive though - lovely haiku.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/5/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am so sorry but I'm not sure what you were trying to say here, did you mean ( But still a nice thought) I am unaware that silica doesn't exist in space and was referring more so to the earth as one of many grains of sand in the galexy. Thank you for your kind review and kindness to review. May happiness become your stalker. TLee
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Out of this world... Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/5/2012 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    literally. lol I guess my thoughts are over the head of some who say they don't get it . Somehow I knew you would and you vindicate my intelligence. Some said they didn't understand the one I wrote about heavens tears so I changed it a bit much as I hated to. Thanks for becoming a friend TLee