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Heavens Tears

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Heavens Tears


                                                          heaven's tears
                                                      In hot desert sands
                                                            frog's revive

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  1. Date: 5/20/2012 8:02:00 AM
    Another pleasant stroll through Haikudom... ;-)) Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/20/2012 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much Terry. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:45:00 AM
    Nice, i really liked it.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/5/2012 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Aditya for your kind review. TLee
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:10:00 PM
    compleatly lost me

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/4/2012 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A breed of frogs bury themselves in the sand in the deserts for as much as 2 years waiting for rain. Then come out mate and as the water dries up they bury themselves again. I guess you don't watch the sience or discovery channel much Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:51:00 PM
    Nice haiku.Enjoyed.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/4/2012 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad to see you know about the desert frogs. Imagine waiting burried in the sand waiting for rain for up to 2 years. Thanks Kash for you praise. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:16:00 PM
    A peek at nature well done Terry hugs vie

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/4/2012 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's like wow. These frogs wait up to 2 yrs for it to rain. Thanks Vie May Nature bring you unending beautiful days. TLee
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:16:00 PM
    Hi Terry...when Heaven cries the desert sands will cool and frogs will peep out from their hiding place. Good command of the Haiku. Well done! Joy Wells

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/4/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    There are frogs that stay burried in the sand up to 2years waiting for the rain in (suspended animation I think is the term) and then come out and mate only to hybernate when the water dries up again. Thank you for your kind review Joy. Hugs TLee