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DAMAGE

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DAMAGE

Drain out the violence from the paintbrush and smear it to the canvas 

Aggressive creatures scuttle into my expanding cranium

Memories of him echoes through the forest…into the atmosphere

Astonishing screams of misfortune filter the forest where he once trailed

Great solitude and rage tortures us all…we will not fall!

Everlasting breakage paints me a portrait of turmoil and what not

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  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:02:00 AM

    from the paint brush...to the canvas. Stong words these!Nice!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 1:42:00 PM

    Awesome! :D This one's epic. Always, Laura