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'I found a smile'

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'I found a smile'


I didn't think of you today, I must be getting better I didn't listen to "our song" today I found one with a better meaning I am not forgetting you just finding a place where I can breathe just like you suggested remember you said, smile for me forget the tears it will make you feel less guilty? that is exactly what I did I found a smile if only for a while I guess it’s better than nothing
©040520121950

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:10:00 PM

    profoundly introspective, dear Wilma. Captured a furtive mood. Nidce job of it. Thanks for your comment. Been quite busy of late. On when I can. love Bob

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Smiles to you Wilma for being such a strong woman.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 6:07:00 PM

    I enjoy these theraputic poems. I needed to write a many my self. Care to take a peek? Somewhere Past Surreal and Song in Passe'. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Very personal dear poet, your write, yet we all can relate ! A great share my friend and picture of how it sometimes must be ! Have a wonderful weekend Wilma....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:43:00 AM

    Help..no,Michael! Alrighty,CTH it is,lol.See you later,gotta a fly to catch..now..where did I put that fly swatter? lol

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:17:00 AM

    Such a straight forward write into a soul so beautiful. Ut o am I flirting again?? Lol. I was just telling a dear friend how I'm working on coming out of my shell and trying to be more open lol. No flies on me lol. I'm good Hun but Arild is getting it wrong it's CTH!! I will take care of him. Lol. Luv n hugs Michael The Quiet Man

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:11:00 PM

    This is wonderful, Wilma. Love when you write like this!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:23:00 PM

    The smile in your pic says it all Wilma, can't say you look self satisfied, just content and happy. Nice you can set this person straight with firm resolve; we girls have choice in the matter!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Love this write of yours..INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Yesss, Why Should We Hold The Gloom Whileas The Stars Rejoice Amid The Spectacular Skies, My Dear Beyound Beautiful Wilma * I Have Been Viewing Your Precious Hearts Poetry For Quite Awhile Now ˜ Perhaps In Truths Notes, Because, You Have Seemed Sooo Beautiful Unto Myself ˜ Keep Painting Your Beauty & Never Stop Smiling ˜ My Love to You, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 1:40:00 PM

    a beautiful poem, about letting go, as we all sometimes hold on a bit longer than we ought to be. I love ur poetry. RONNY

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:53:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:49:00 PM

    Wilma,seeing you on my screen always brings a smile to my face..I love the message in this write,Cape Town Cutie,(ups!) haha..have a great weekend,Wilma! Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Wilma, I have only ever seen you smile, unless you change your pic...have a great weekend my lovely..David

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:04:00 PM

    This is better...your poem, Wilma....beautiful written, so deep and lovely. - Give you my smile and wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise