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Below is the poem entitled Adrift which was written by poet Joseph May. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Adrift

"He" is a companion she craves
He never argues, fulfilling all her needs
He is her emotional haven, that enslaves
She sees no blood..- but inside she bleeds

Her reality becomes insanity
As insanity controls her reality
She realizes she needs to escape
But he kills that thought, her mind is raped

As she slips further into a black hole
Her family and friend pray for her soul
She becomes blind  and cannot see
That there is a way out, she can break the chains and be free

Her drug addiction now being treated
His grip loosened, now soon to be defeated 




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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Love the emotional piece. Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Gripping and emotional write Joseph...Well deserved win and congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Joseph...tremendous poem

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Congratulations with your awesome poem. Joesph, thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 5/17/2013 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for my placement in your contest PD
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 8:20:00 AM
    Any addiction is a terrible companion..Enjoyed reading your rendiction of the topic..Excellent presentation..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:19:00 PM
    I seems to be a universal problem affecting so many and it ruins lives. How sad people become slaves to this addiction that begets poverty. You said it with touching sensitivity.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing this poem Joseph, it describes well the fears of addictions and abuse, luv vie

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 5/4/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    absolutely Vie..its an epidemic that cuts across all categories...thanks for sharing