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I Just Cant Win

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I Just Cant Win

I try and try
to no avail
I just cant seem to win.
They tell me ill never make it,
real optimistic of them.
With things about
my growing daily life
and nothing for it to show.
I just cant win
Why is that? i ask myself,
why can you not be better?!
I cant quite reach
 the highest step,
I cant climb the
highest rope.
If i tried to bake a cake
I am positive it'll explode.
Im not sure who i am yet
but i know i'll get 
through life grinning. 
I will suceed oneday
but for nowL
Im just not winning

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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:40:00 AM
    We must believe in ourselves Rachelle. - Luck for you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Turley Avatar Rachelle Turley
    Date: 5/6/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yess, We need to find the positive side of every situation and just keep believing in ourselves! Thanks you so much :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 10:27:00 AM
    this is something i know well the feeling of not being good engouh not beingable to win i like how you made it personal and the imagry you used good job

    Turley Avatar Rachelle Turley
    Date: 5/6/2012 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As lOng as we hold our heads high, life is all about how we see ourselves. Somedays its as if we can't do a thing right, but most days we just have to prove ourself wrong ;) Thanks you!