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Reflection's Changed A Bit

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Reflection's Changed A Bit

           "Reflection's Changed A Bit"


No racked babe, but I've had no cut and paste!
     Like young casabas up front and still 'kewl'!
          F i n e 'Brick House' (...'more than a mouthful's a waste')!
               Arse compared to a 'forty-dollar mule'
                    With a swing exemplifying my rule!
                         Each lavender curve, smooth as South Sea Pearls
                              Enveloped by trellising golden curls.
                                   Body and English, my lingoes in Lit.
                                         And tough guys still stammer, week-kneed with whirls.
                                              Mirror's the same... 
                                                                           reflection's changed a bit.*


~by deborah burch©
5/03/2012




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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 3:59:00 PM

    This is a good one to submit to a publisher! Try again let gather 3! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:21:00 PM

    This was very rappie! ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:52:00 PM

    A unique and creative write Deborah....congrats on your win. Hugs

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:05:00 PM

    Belated personal congrats on such a great poem. Unique and witty entry and it was my hope that you better able to see how a tweak here and there can settle the dust, so to speak, and make you fall in love with your words all over again. Hugs, chum. I plan to read and comment tonight. But I am seriously wiped out.

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:50:00 PM

    loved it the first time and congrats on your win!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea :) hugss, love ya
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:44:00 PM

    Congratulations Deb on your win in Cyndi's contest.Enjoyed the read.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you dear Kash!! big hugs, love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:29:00 PM

    I enjoyed the write..don't know why you added all that to the end. Congrad's on Your win Light & Love

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..thank you Debbie...? you mean the Very end? all the explanations? (d/t a comment...just wanted to make sure diversity could understand what was being said) ...thank you, love ya much!!
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Carol...big hugs, love ya...hope you are feeling better :)
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your birthday suit win Debs xx

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ~GG~ !! big hugs, love ya deb
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 2:58:00 AM

    hey Cap'n Deb huge congrats on your naked win..David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol, thank you so much David...just one of those things I like not to wear ;) big hugs, love ya , cap'n deb lol
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:08:00 AM

    love this witty piece - and it's very informative too. i love the mae west quote

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL...thank you Jack...yes Mae West had a lot of tongue in cheek quotes that I like too...huggs
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Really well done piece Deborah; this should shine in the contest.."

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Joe so much...:)
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 4:06:00 PM

    you must be tired. cause you been running around in my mind all day.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL...you're too funny John! ;)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:40:00 PM

    How creative Deb, a great entry for the contest, best of luck

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you BB :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 2:57:00 PM

    deb, this was beautiful. ronny.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Ronny :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:35:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors Deborah. Love, Carol

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Carol...hugs, love ya deb...your encouragement is so helpful to me always :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 4:53:00 AM

    Deb, Deb, Deb,..you are one kewl gal....love it, best of luck...David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL...thank you David...LOL
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 2:45:00 AM

    intriguingly expressed, deborah... your language had both body ( form) and engligh tone ( content).. winning huggs!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Nette I greatly appreciate your encouragement :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:15:00 AM

    Smile ˜ Kool, My Dear Beautiful Deborah * Love The Humour In Slight & Most Assuredly, Love The Look ˜ I Was Just Considering Yesterday, How In As We Age We Begin To View Beauty Within A Different Light ˜ Definitely A Looker Here & Thank You, For Your Lovely Visit ˜ My Love Always, John!:) ˜

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *blush* thank you John :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:07:00 AM

    Very creative, Deborah! Nicely done. Bilingual? : )

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/7/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL thank you Ruben...yes sir 2 languages: body and english...LOL :)
  1. Date: 5/3/2012 11:20:00 PM

    wow, you got a lot of lingo into this one. Gonna drive someone like Kashinath crazy trying to figure it out. ME LIKES. One of the best of the birthday suit poems!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 5/4/2012 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *blush* lol thank you dear Andrea...your kindness and encouragement really means a lot to me! Thank you. love, ya deb