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Broken Bows

While as getting lost aneath the truth betwixt; postmortems lines....

Shall I engage to entangle myself once more within these enlivened

Embodiments, whom wish to cast me into their unblinking morticious eyes?!

Projecting melancholy tears; this enigma chained unto its own bend and bites

Misconceived, scripted sights within interpretatives thorns and now I find  

Myself pressed, to be nailed unto their judgmentals crucifying cross....

Why; but I know why? As if I am indebted unto they this life of mine yet, how?

O wretched flesh so imperfect you are amid these constant falls as they

Whom close their eyes to look away; that darkness it may be, although

Spawned from the very irony of its own amissful night in poisoned arrows....

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....“And Broken Bows!?”

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Totally not but to some extent, i tried to understand. Felt nice my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:11:00 AM
    A very potent write dear poet...your title to this write pulled me in with curiosity John ! Powerful, and filling ! Have a blessed day....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 12:53:00 PM
    I can feel you searching you understanding of life experiences and emotions here John.."

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 7:29:00 AM
    ...a rose among the thorns :) well done John...big hugs, deb

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 5:38:00 PM
    poisoned arrows.... cast of broken bows, I might add , fulfilling the fad of knows not what... spondees the irony of its own amissful night. Ha, but the truth betwixt postmortem lines.. gives reality to the valued finish, replenish... replenish, eagle's flight, away.. away. Agape, agape, Thanks John for stopping by. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 5:32:00 PM
    yes and crucify they will and crucify they must. to justify themselves from their own lives of sin.