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locked in a smile Part I

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Below is the poem entitled locked in a smile Part I which was written by poet John Loving III. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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locked in a smile Part I

locked in a smile
are secrets untold
reality waiting for love 
to unfold
anxiously waiting are words 
that are kept
inside my heart
to an unknown depth
for unto you i give my eyes
for my eyes there is 
no greater prize
for unto you i give my ears
for each utterance and 
every syllable it hears

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:11:00 PM

    nice onto the next part

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 6:52:00 AM

    smile, I like this..David

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:42:00 PM

    Ps. Smile ˜ "Hi Baby, I Never Told Your Loveliness How Much I Love You Name Did I ? Nor Have I Told Your Beauty, Tis Sooo Very True ! 'My Beautiful Love.'" *

     Avatar Date: 5/5/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Also, Thank You, For 'Your Warm Sweeet Visit.'" *
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:08:00 PM

    Yes. The many types of smiles are fascinating, You have to guess what's in back of them. Good write, John. Love, daver

     Avatar Date: 5/5/2012 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."SMILE, 'YESSS INDEED.'" *
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 12:36:00 PM

    How do you know 5/7/5 is the right way?

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Smile ˜ Hi Baby, I Give My Your Lovely Beauty, Sweeet Kisses Too * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

     Avatar Date: 5/5/2012 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Ooops, I Meant 'Sheer Beauty.'" *
     Avatar Date: 5/5/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."A Soft Sweeet Favourite, 'In Shear Beauty.'" *
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 8:01:00 AM

    Oh John, this is more than sweet. This is very close to a beautiful Song my dear friend. Just add and delete few words and you can make it a Song with a depth so sweet and lovely. Thanks my friend for liking my series Epic. It was nice to visit your locked smile. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...John Loving III

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:35:00 AM

    A passionate write Mr. Loving ! Each day I pray to Jehovah God in Jesus Christ's name, for Him to guide me with my children. I did so with my 28 yr old son, whom I also single parented, as I do with Noah. My 28 yr. old has his own trucking business(18 wheeler)cross country...and he still calls me every day to tell me that he loves me, and when he passes by Noah and my home, he stops by to visit ! I'm blessed ! *smiles* Have a blessed weekend sir...much love, james

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 5/5/2012 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i am a trucker too but local. if he's ever in the St. Louis area tell him to holler for little johnny.
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:53:00 AM

    yeah...5/4/3.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:38:00 AM

    I'm on my way to read the second part. This is very sweet, John. :)

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:19:00 PM

    enjoyed your smile, hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:16:00 PM

    This is a very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:14:00 PM

    This is a very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 4:54:00 PM

    This sounds really serious..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good to be that devoted ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara