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Horizons

I wake to new horizons Distant vistas kiss my eyes Was it only yesterday I slept neath foreign skies Where has the familiar gone My perspective is unclear I struggle to make sense of it Is now my future here I cast my gaze about me But a different world I see I am standing in tomorrow Looking at what used to be

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  1. Date: 7/4/2012 12:10:00 AM

    I love this rhyme Bob. It is a gem. I especially like the phrase "standing in tomorrow". Thank you for your nice comment on my poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 2:57:00 AM

    Time is such a wonderful subject to write about and you have done it so well here. You won because your verses are beautifully unique. I love those last two lines! :)

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/13/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Elizabeth. Much appreciated.
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Hi Bob congrats on the win, short but yo the point liked it a lot, will be back to read more

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/12/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Owen
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 11:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Bob. Love, Carol

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/12/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank Carol
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:25:00 AM

    Congratulaitons Bob on your win!! well done!! big hugs, love ya deb

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/12/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Deb
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 7:18:00 AM

    Bob congrats on your win..David

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/10/2012 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David
  1. Date: 5/10/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning piece Bob, nice one. xx

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/10/2012 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:28:00 PM

    short and sweet, just how I like this kind for the contest (new world, right?) Very much enjoyed it!

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/7/2012 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 3:59:00 PM

    beautiful! i love the rhyme, the flow and most important, what it says! very perceptive.

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 5/3/2012 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ilene. Much appreciated