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Huffy

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Huffy

The
    fastest
            bike
               around
                      Whistling
                               without
                                      a sound
                                   She
                               cut
                      through
                  the
               air
    Race me?
               You
                    wouldn't
                               dare
                                    I crashed
                                her
                            and
                    bashed
                her
    I jumped
                her
                    and
                         dumped
                                    her
                                        I put
                                             her
                                     through
                                 hell
                             But
                       loved
                   her
           as well
      And
   my
      favorite
              thing
                   about
                         my
                           Huffy
                                  Glide
                                        was
                                            the
                                 lightning
                            bolt
                         on
                     the
                side

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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Also, I am on sneaky mode right now-- but wanted to day how I saw your blog, and enjoyed seeing the photos you posted-- that walking stick is really great! You sure got talent I think and your other woodworks-- Thank you for posting those, together with the awesome pics of your family! Your kids are so adorable and such a hoot! Love their photos and how cool to have those dress up days in school! Brings a smile to my face to see that and wowsers, you sure can be a family of models!! :)!

    p.iNk Avatar binibining p.iNk
    Date: 10/2/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I mean, "say"-- sounded like I hab a cold, saying "day"
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Oh this is just so cool, reading this wonder, Caleb! I am just such a sucker for formatted poems sometimes and how you did this was really fun and enjoyable-it caught my eye, since "huff" was one of the names of our kittens before--will tell next time the reason behind the name. I deviate again-- I am on weird mode, since reading the poem, can also be applicable to a girl, I think (in some ways!!). Thank you so much again for my awesome placement in your contest-- I am so honored by it.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 1:20:00 PM
    I think I have said "wow" on so many of your poems now that it's beginning to lose meaning... But seriously, this is crazy cool! Such an awesome shape poem. And the subtle rhyme throughout? GOLDEN.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 3:50:00 PM
    Caleb, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/22/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankya kindly.
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:36:00 AM
    short, to the point! and took me back...excellent

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/22/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me too. Thank you.
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Caleb. Love, Carol

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/22/2012 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carol!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Love this clever format, and enjoyable poem! Congrats on a unique poem~~!!

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Carrie!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:31:00 AM
    An interesting bike ride here, and wonderful to read. congrats. harry

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Harry!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:37:00 AM
    this is clever and creative but, best of all, it sounds great when you read it! congrats on your win!

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Ilene!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 1:22:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win..David

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks david!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 1:01:00 AM
    Congratulations Caleb that was like riding my bike with the odd size wheels xx

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha! Thanks!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:43:00 AM
    Very nice... Although I became a bit dizzy reading it... ;>D Terry

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me too!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 9:33:00 PM
    Creative and fun read. Congrats on your win!

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Cecilia!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:46:00 PM
    Cool format, Caleb! Congrats on your win. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:46:00 PM
    Cool format, Caleb! Congrats on your win. Ruben.

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ruben!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:30:00 PM
    how cool. your pattern is much like a very long zig zag lightening bolt. Creative! and congrats on the win.

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yep. I miss that bike...
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:58:00 PM
    How very clever. congratulations. Loe, Joyce

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Joyce!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:08:00 PM
    Can't get any more exciting with twists and turns and stunts than this shape poem! Such an exciting entry for my contest. The judges were very impressed! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:08:00 PM
    Can't get any more exciting with twists and turns and stunts than this shape poem! Such an exciting entry for my contest. The judges were very impressed! Gwendolen

    Smith Avatar Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/18/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Gwendolen! I love to write shape and concrete poems. It was a pleasure to enter your contest!