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Can This Go On

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Can This Go On

As friends forever to be. 
Sacred broken rules inside sexuality. 
Forever we were mistaken drifter apart. 

Can this go on loving you my friend. 
Or is it wrongfully wrong should we make it end.  

The feeling of love at friendships sake. 
Did we go to far when we love made. 

Does it need to stop emotions so confused. 
Was it a mistake did we just love use. 

Closing me eyes i will never forget. 
Tell you the truth I have no love regrets. 

Walking forward was it just a need. 
Hoping its just a flower a sprouted see.  

Can this go on loving you my friend.
Or is it wrongfully wrong should it end?

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:39:00 AM
    Lovely written poem Jack, hope the friendships never end. - oxox love Anne-Lise