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Tempest Of Pain

In the mists that swirl and speak your name
I'm quickly falling under.
This depth of my love's burning flame
just sends my soul asunder.

When daylight fails and I am lost
it's your dark heart I find.
If you could only feel the cost;
if you could read my mind.

You'd know the damage you have done;
the tempest of my pain.
With battles lost,no victory's won,
no pleasure left to gain.

Now you'll be on your merry way;
we never more shall meet.
The way I feel mere words can't say
as I cringe in defeat.



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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Deb....very deep emotion...congratulations on your win. Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Deeply sad... but well written. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Congrats, Deb. Well done. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 1:24:00 AM

    Wonderful poem Flows so well even with such sadness. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:05:00 PM

    Deb, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:58:00 PM

    great portrait of emotional depth thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:00:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this fine write Deb.. Sorry to hear you are having a difficult time at the moment.. It is also great to see you back at the Soup :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:53:00 AM

    thanks for entering Deb and congrats on your first place win in the contest

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:37:00 AM

    A wonderful flow of feelings in this write dear poet ! And I see that congratulations are in order Deb...(((((claps))))) ! Well done my friend ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Yes! I too say congratulations on a fine poem and in your winning this contest.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 11:37:00 PM

    Congrtas on your win with this beautiful poem.Nice to see a poem from you after some time.I wrote on the same song for this contest.It failed :(

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 6:59:00 PM

    so cowardly. stand up and &iiiiiitch!!!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:26:00 PM

    Big congratulations to you in this contest. Love the song you chose to emulate with your cool poem.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Congrats Deb! Nice poem!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Lightfoot" contest Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:08:00 AM

    wow you blended it right in there great..and I could hear music! Light & Love Congrad's

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:46:00 AM

    Congratulations

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Congrats Deb on your win! Well Done...big hugs, love deb

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 4:15:00 AM

    Thouching written poem, but still lovely. Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win Deb. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 1:54:00 AM

    sad yet beautiful in your most expressive way, deb... wonderful!.. best of wishes and huggs!

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 1:29:00 AM

    Superb write dear poet,winning wish's.xoxo...........Elliott

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 1:21:00 AM

    Deb, another great entree for this contest, love it..David