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Hoot's Toot

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Hoot's Toot


There once was a little Jack Russell
who was as sweet as she was cute
and went by the nicname of hoot.

Now in the evening the
family would gather 
to spend family time together.
Everyone including Hoot was there.

Me on the couch
the kids on the floor
and dad in his favorite chair.

As we sat there a smell most foul
quickly filled the air.

It seems our sweet little hoot
had let loose with a toot
and now we are all fighting for air.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:43:00 AM
    Very cute write.Yeah I can see your family here.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/14/2012 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ah you are exploring what we talked about. Hope you enjoyed this almost limerick type poem. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 4:45:00 PM
    My bad I didn't check the requirements for a limerick before I listed this as one. It sounded like one so I just assumed that it was. I will change it's listing. Thanks for letting me know. May you have fair weather and sunny days. TLee

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 1:42:00 AM
    Terry, great words, though a little odd for a limerick, like it though..David

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/2/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My bad. I didn't check the requirements for a limerick before I listed this as one. It sounded like one so I just assumed that it was one. I will change it's listing straight away. Thanks for letting me know. May you have fair weather and sunny days. TLee
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:35:00 PM
    Very cute, we have a dog named Genie and she knows how to foul the air pretty good. Then she turns those innocent eyes our way, nice poem thank you for sharing Terry, luv vie

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/1/2012 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know what you mean that who not me look of innocence. If I didn't love my animals I would put her butt outside to stay. She often fills the air. Thanks Vienna for your kind words and kind review. Nice to make your acquaintance TLee
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:19:00 PM
    This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/1/2012 8:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shirley and thank you for your kindness to review. TLee