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Rusted Nail

Today, upon the ground, I found a rusted nail.
Red and yellowed since its use,
It was caked and swollen; cracked lines top to bottom
With one turn in its body where last it was removed.
And the head was tilted slightly from a blow
Received when it was first employed and put to use.
I pondered of the purpose it had served
And the structure it had helped to hold and form.
I recognized its shape having spent many days 
With hammer in my hand and blueprint in mind.
I have straightened many that were pulled and bent 
And drove them to serve purpose.
Once this nail had value and function was providence.
Now, it fills a wrinkle of my palm 
And leads me to wonder….
What will someday become of me?
Will a member of the generation born this day
Look upon me and speculate my past,
And weigh my usefulness against my keep?
Will I present as bent?
And, will the balding gray and shortened step
Persuade them I have passed my day of worth? 
Or, will they look about their world 
And see what I have made?
So much from just one rusted nail. 

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 3:56:00 PM

    a nail biter, and a poem I must read again. very unique... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:34:00 PM

    You won in a contest with this entry? I'm not surprised. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:05:00 PM

    lovely this makes one ponder what will be!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:21:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Ray. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 11:33:00 AM

    Excellent poetry here Ray!Congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:20:00 AM

    Ray congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Ah, a very strong analogy here, Ray. Most enjoyed reading this poem. Congratulations on your win in nikko's contest!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 7:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Nikko's Contest with this excellent write, Ray! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 4:49:00 PM

    wonderfully reflective, and I can't ever think of you as just a rusted nail! Congrats for your win with this beauty.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Hi Ray! This was a poem that also got me thinking so much, and it also reminded me of just how there's so much to learn from everyday things-- I love how you took a rusted nail and gleaned so much from it-- Thank you so much for entering this thought provoking piece, I truly enjoyed reading this! Super congrats on your win :D!

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 6/2/2012 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Nikko, For providing a playground for thought. RAY
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:33:00 PM

    this nailed me to my seat,great write

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 6/1/2012 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard, I'm trying retirement but I think I'll look for more work. And meanwhile, I'll write another book and a few lines of poeTry.
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:03:00 PM

    ....you know - a feather can be a whole chicken... - Well written poem, I like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 6/1/2012 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I like to mix figurative and literal language. And yes, this one was personal. With time, I'll see the chicken!
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 1:39:00 AM

    This piece wakes striking thoughts, it refurbishes dreams. Every man must work to leave inspiring legacy.

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 6/1/2012 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Onye, I can look around and see the lives I've touched as a teacher and principal. My first students turned 54 this year. I smile at their faces Young and Old. I hope your life leaves you with the same feeling! RAY
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:02:00 PM

    To have a purpose is to fit, the rusty nail has gave its all, it left its mark more than a bit, your introspect has built its wall, well done ol mate, be walking tall....

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 6/1/2012 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Don, for your nicely written poetic interpretation of my work. You sum it up very well! Thanks, RAY
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 5:21:00 PM

    This poem makes you say "ohhh" and makes you think. Awesome.

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 5/1/2012 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Toguyen. I contemplate retirement daily. 36 years as a teacher and I don't know what I want to be next! RAY