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Here In The Valley

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Here In The Valley

Never truly caring very much about verse and or writing

Twas something that just happened one day a few years ago

Pressed and stirred and shaken since then yet, growing weary

And have been for quite awhile now; nothing joyful and no reward

Tis but the same mundane moment; jade in gray....

Eyes cast within a shard of shattered glass; and where's the laugh!?

Not in this place; as what could got twisted amid what should

Have been but everything got lost and I grew tired and time

Stayed the same; jack in the box as it always has been....

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....“Here In the Valley” ~

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 10:07:00 PM
    Interesting!! :) Love the last line. Really cool one. ^^ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 1:55:00 PM
    A very personal piece...a "llanto" of sorts...effectively stated....