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The Kings Three Sons Part 5

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Below is the poem entitled The Kings Three Sons Part 5 which was written by poet Erica Szabo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Kings Three Sons Part 5

She rode forth with revolution on her back. The wizard sat back, “Well,my child, what did you think?” “I want to do what the daughter did. The King was right; his sons were nasty people. But that can not be the end, can it” I asked, “what about the battle, did she win, how does the story end?” With a laugh, the wizard winked, “The three sons are still hear and they fight their sister every day. Their battle is all around, Ii only you were to look close.” “But how do you start a story when you don’t know the ending at all?” “But you do know the ending, child. One day, when you are big and strong, you will meet the King's daughter and you will end the suffering that the three sons have brought on. The suffering that goes on to this day.” I left the Wizard that day sitting upon his log. I pondered what that Wizard told me. The King's three sons were evil and filled the land with Genocide. No, they were Genocide. For without them, Revolution could not be. I whet home and told my mother, “Mother, Wherever there is hatred and war with in the land, Wherever people are struggling to be free, Werever hungry babies cry Look for me, ma, I'll be there.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:37:00 AM
    I will edit this page for you and send it to your soupmail. hugs, catie :)

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey
    Date: 4/29/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    there wasn't too many errors to edit on that page at all. I sent it to your soupmail. hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:35:00 AM
    You need someone to edit this for you. It will be worth your time and trouble to get that work done, as it is a lovely story. Best wishes, hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Lovely story, Erica. Perhaps though, English is not your first language, as it does appear you've used a "spell check" program, but in the english language there are many words that are pronounced the same, yet spelled differently. Like 'brake' and 'break' There are several of these errors in your story, perhaps you can find someone, make the necessary corrections. It is such a long story, it will be a big job. do you have an english dictionary? that will help, to look up the meanings of words.