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Love, War, Eternity

There's a battle within it settles like a bird on a beach waiting carelessly to capture you with her lustful touch of sinful iniquities minutes of her stare could snatch you away like the a kidnapping or sand from a powerful wave but how sweet is her lips from the taste the Love of Money is stupid and deceiving but Wisdom, her intelligence is more believing as friendly, forever loving, complicate, more than vague but beauty of these two cannot separate beauty brings happiness emotionally this always feels the same but thought of life is a choice that we always make She brings life the other brings death She suffocates the other brings breath Love directs the path that we take Shall we be lost and crash because we swerve or with thoughts emerge to a straight path of priceless life gifted with eternity? infinite be remembered as one whom goodness claims evilness is shun from light thought of as nothing before sight Eternity we can forever be bright

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 3:43:00 PM

    wow.... your world is all about HER... love war and eternity... what a blessing. Money never brings good... beauty is my happiness... This is nice, very pleasant & satisfying ... loving the light we are entwined toooooooo :-) always~ PD..."

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 10:59:00 AM

    From start to finish, this is a beautiful poem. It is deep and makes you think. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla