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Dreary Days

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Dreary Days

Dreary Days


Mid-day, damp and dreary
       In an unrelenting seige,
              Impails hopes of cheery
                     Thoughts, that chill within it's breeze!
                            No help seen for my plight--
                                   Of fruitless aquisition!
                                          The sun has taken                         flight!
                                                 And left a pale rendition.



~deborah burch
4/28/2012

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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:03:00 PM
    I guess we have to have these to appreciate the others. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Alas but look ye back now quick... unfurl that brow imagine the trick... a sun flys again in burst of flame... plays with you it's silly game... For within the chill is wildest night... amidst the siege is deepest lust... within the plight is seen our fight... surrender with pleazure we all must. And this was the first of yours I've read... now off to see what else ye've packed away in yer seabag. SeaWolf

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 6:15:00 PM
    I love how you have reinforced the action by putting the word flight off to the right. Neat poem Lady. May you fall into a puddle of love and can't get up. TLee

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:33:00 PM
    Deborah, awe! what a flight.. even the thoughts of a chilling breeze... nice..always..pd

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much PD~ :) very much!! love ya deb
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Very very very Good!!! So enjoyed. Hugs Michael

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) ooooowee!! look at all those verys!!! lol Thank you so much Michael for your continued kindness...big hugs, much love~deb
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Wow!!! this is so good,I enjoyed this much. My favorite lines is the following: No help seen for my plight-- Of fruitless aquisition! GREAT!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thank you dear Elliott my friend!! Sooo much!! hugs~love,deb
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Deb my weather is about the same damp and dreary, your poem is nothing like that though, it is wonderful, and I like the creative layout, thanks for visiting my poems

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you BB so much! Your kindness means so much! big hugs,love deb
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:58:00 AM
    lovely piece indeed, my friend

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you jack!! :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:08:00 AM
    What a wonderful write this is! It says so much here Debbie! My favorite lines have to be the lines, "No help seen for my plight--, Of fruitless acquisition!" such powerful words spoken here my friend! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this afternoon! I love this write lots! Great Work!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Russell!! How I have missed your sweet spirit! and kind encouragement! So very glad you are back and pray all is well with you!! Big Hug!! love , deb!!
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Smile ˜ I'm listening unto the song by Lifehouse called, 'First Time' * Cheer up sweet precious beautiful girl ˜ Grab the tail of a windful kite and sail, upon the wings of everlastings love ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜