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diminished feelings

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diminished feelings

as my mind erupts,insanity take a hold of me
the thought of losing her was one thing,now
the loneliness kick's in
the sadness and sorrow flows above me like 
a river
I try so hard to get her out of my mind
I thought to myself,it was harder than I thought
to ignore the fact your gone.

I thought,should I stay or should I go
should I make a choice by making a commitment I
don't want to regret.
was it fact or fiction,all she wanted was to be loved 
be cared for.
I should respect her feelings,so much was at stake, 
so little time 
I never knew how hard to lose her was this bad

now your gone,I have to start all over back to 1.

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