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Even my smile

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Even my smile

Drifting
slowly
in the warmth
of her desire;
I rise 

My every member,
is on fire

Yes,
even
my smile

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  1. Date: 4/3/2014 3:48:00 AM
    Yowser! You even made this beautiful, and have some guy giggling... MEN, TAKE NOTE- THIS IS THE KIND OF MAN WOMEN SEEK! Heck, you could give lessons and get rich off it!

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 8:05:00 PM
    Your "every member"? LOL! I wont say "good one" or "good piece"! : ) Very creative, my friend! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Watch that on fire smile - bad for the teeth. Another fine rendering, Sir James. Suggest a cold shower. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 3:42:00 AM
    And I give you my smile James.....like it. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:32:00 PM
    very sweet that you made it "even your smile!" Me likes.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Oh, you are such a passionate man, James. I can't wait to meet you one day. Next time I travel north, I will visit you and Noah. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:30:00 AM
    I am caught up in the clever way you lead me through the wonderful warmth of desire; you manage to heat up a page with no effort at all which is quqite an accomplishment. Into my faves James, you do it so well :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:11:00 AM
    lovely, romantic, and sultry too. Beautiful poem, James. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Passion flows my poet friend. Excellent piece. Michael. Thank you for all the warm and beautiful comments.

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 7:09:00 PM
    this made me smile, good piece!

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 6:19:00 PM
    Ps. Smile ˜ "A Favourite In Delicate Beauty" *

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 6:16:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Yes, Yess, Yesss, A Thousand Times Yessss ˜ She Is Sooo Beautiful Isn't She * My Love, Forever & For Always, John!:) ˜