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About This Poem

her eyelashes' flicker


before melting---
her eyelashes' flicker
with my every breath

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    Funom Makama
    Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM
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    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 5/9/2012 12:44:00 PM
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    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Kash. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/2/2012 9:01:00 PM
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    whew!!! 9 p.m I JUST made my deadline I set for myself. Now I want to do a blog and then get busy on other things.
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    john freeman
    Date: 5/2/2012 6:36:00 PM
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    Haaaaaaa! Coo breath Luke, melts the bat guano. Smile. Thanks for stopping by, Agape, Moses
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 5/2/2012 9:19:00 AM
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    romantic as ever Kash and a superb visual luv.. appreciate the enthusiastic hello from u luv..
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 5/2/2012 6:45:00 AM
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    More than a flicker... it seems like a flash... Terry
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    John Lipari
    Date: 5/2/2012 6:17:00 AM
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    Great work...I'm thinking, candle?
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM
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    wake up, little rosebud!!... where are you, lol... :) huggs!
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    David Williams
    Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM
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    here for a second read Kash, just as good..David
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/1/2012 11:40:00 PM
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    just here to say HELLO and very soon, Good night!(thanks for the comments, my friend).
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    Charles Henderson
    Date: 5/1/2012 10:35:00 PM
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    Good one Kash, I answered your questions on face book.
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    Ashesh Das
    Date: 5/1/2012 12:57:00 PM
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    Beautiful haiku. What a lovely imagery these words paint. Love it.
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    Ashesh Das
    Date: 5/1/2012 12:53:00 PM
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    Bea
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 5/1/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    very descriptive write, with such a romantic undertone. Nice. :D
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 5/1/2012 9:37:00 AM
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    A very nice visual here,friend, and thnx for your kind visit, jag
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    Raj Dey Ranjan
    Date: 5/1/2012 3:02:00 AM
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    The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides. Eyelashes plays an important role in the beauty of eyes. You are great here with your unique style of imagery. Love this extraordinary creation.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/30/2012 5:30:00 PM
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    Just who was melting, she or you? This is awesome, Kash!!
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 4/30/2012 10:16:00 AM
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    Awww... too cute!
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 4/30/2012 5:55:00 AM
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    Beautiful and sensuous sketch of a melting love. With best wishes..Ravindra...Kash
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 4/30/2012 4:24:00 AM
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    ahooo!.... saying the unsayable is your forte.. iloveittt! :) huggs
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 4/29/2012 8:13:00 AM
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    The art of suggestion is a gift and you have it Kashi! Just great.
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/28/2012 6:26:00 PM
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    oh Wow dada....you really write a simmering haiku!scintillating,mind blowing!
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 4/28/2012 3:18:00 PM
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    The lashes flicker, the eyes close and then the kiss comes. Very passionate haiku, Kash. Bravo! Thank you for stopping by my work. I'm doing my best to read poetry again. Love, Carolyn
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    ChiquitaChiamaka Baity
    Date: 4/28/2012 1:28:00 PM
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    Simply beautiful Kash.... i luv this...smiles....thanks for sharing
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    CYNDI MACMILLAN
    Date: 4/28/2012 12:57:00 PM
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    What an awesome, haiku! Powerful. Thanks for checking in Kash! You bring so much to the soup. The place wouldn't be the same without you!
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    David Williams
    Date: 4/28/2012 12:09:00 PM
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    Kash I love this, nicely done..David
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/28/2012 10:58:00 AM
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    Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my Birthday Card for Linda-Marie..Sara
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    Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/28/2012 8:57:00 AM
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    Kash...I'm speechless...fav big hugs,love ~deb
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 4/28/2012 8:32:00 AM
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    Love your haiku Kash says it all with the eyes and breath hugs vie

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    :)
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/28/2012 8:17:00 AM
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    You are "the king of haiku" kash, like it!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

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    :)
    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 4/28/2012 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)
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