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her eyelashes' flicker


before melting---
her eyelashes' flicker
with my every breath

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:44:00 PM

    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Kash. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 9:01:00 PM

    whew!!! 9 p.m I JUST made my deadline I set for myself. Now I want to do a blog and then get busy on other things.

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Haaaaaaa! Coo breath Luke, melts the bat guano. Smile. Thanks for stopping by, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 9:19:00 AM

    romantic as ever Kash and a superb visual luv.. appreciate the enthusiastic hello from u luv..

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:45:00 AM

    More than a flicker... it seems like a flash... Terry

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:17:00 AM

    Great work...I'm thinking, candle?

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM

    wake up, little rosebud!!... where are you, lol... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM

    here for a second read Kash, just as good..David

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 11:40:00 PM

    just here to say HELLO and very soon, Good night!(thanks for the comments, my friend).

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 10:35:00 PM

    Good one Kash, I answered your questions on face book.

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku. What a lovely imagery these words paint. Love it.

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 12:53:00 PM

    Bea

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 10:50:00 AM

    very descriptive write, with such a romantic undertone. Nice. :D

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 9:37:00 AM

    A very nice visual here,friend, and thnx for your kind visit, jag

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 3:02:00 AM

    The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides. Eyelashes plays an important role in the beauty of eyes. You are great here with your unique style of imagery. Love this extraordinary creation.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:30:00 PM

    Just who was melting, she or you? This is awesome, Kash!!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Awww... too cute!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:55:00 AM

    Beautiful and sensuous sketch of a melting love. With best wishes..Ravindra...Kash

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 4:24:00 AM

    ahooo!.... saying the unsayable is your forte.. iloveittt! :) huggs

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:13:00 AM

    The art of suggestion is a gift and you have it Kashi! Just great.

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:18:00 PM

    The lashes flicker, the eyes close and then the kiss comes. Very passionate haiku, Kash. Bravo! Thank you for stopping by my work. I'm doing my best to read poetry again. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 1:28:00 PM

    Simply beautiful Kash.... i luv this...smiles....thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:57:00 PM

    What an awesome, haiku! Powerful. Thanks for checking in Kash! You bring so much to the soup. The place wouldn't be the same without you!

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Kash I love this, nicely done..David

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my Birthday Card for Linda-Marie..Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Kash...I'm speechless...fav big hugs,love ~deb

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Love your haiku Kash says it all with the eyes and breath hugs vie

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:17:00 AM

    You are "the king of haiku" kash, like it!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:14:00 AM

    whoa! so sensual. I am putting this one in my favs! Thanks, Kash. Hugs, Catie :)

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