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At the park with my kite

A zephyr rustles the edges of my kite
A vivid sail aloft against the clouds
My thoughts, blue sky and a spring breeze
A gust and I am taken away, breathless

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:08:00 PM

    A very sensory write enjoyed Raskin, where have been holed up of late? and thanks for your comment..)

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 2:04:00 PM

    I like this one Raskin, few lines but sensibly words. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Enjoyed catching that breeze with you..Very descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 6:25:00 AM

    this actually takes me there with you! very very nice! (p.s. i love your name!)