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  1. Date: 5/5/2012 10:01:00 PM

    this is a very enjoyable quintain, BB. Belated congrats for it!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" BB. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:29:00 AM

    Congratulations BB!!!! I'm so glad this won!! I like it a lot! :) but you already know that ;) big hugs, love ya ~deb

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 2:59:00 PM

    Very nice BB. Enjoyed

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:56:00 PM

    i just love this wonderful write, butterfly

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:30:00 PM

    One of the best I've read in a while. A soulful write. Hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 5:50:00 PM

    I really believe this poem is one of my favorites of yours! It says so much in so few words...I know that that sentence is overused but it is so very true! I think the "leaf being adrift" is perfect for this poem, this has to be my favorite part of your write! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:18:00 PM

    BB with words like these you won't be adrift for long, this cries out of hidden strength, tap into it...love David

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:06:00 AM

    Great write ~BB love the depth! big hugs,love~deb

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Deb
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Safe landing my dear girl, always vie

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tahnk you Vie
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 5:08:00 AM

    Wow, this is really good! Admirable wording and your last line is beauty.

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/28/2012 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Raskin