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Communication

                        

                                                       I say I need you
                                                   You hear I want you
                                                       I say I love you
                                                   You hear I need you
                                                 I say come live with me.
                                             You hear please support me.
                                                     I say I'm too tired
                                               You hear I don't want you.
                                          If you would LISTEN to the words
                                           as they are SAID then what you 
                                      THINK they mean won't tear us APART.

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  1. Date: 4/27/2012 6:28:00 PM

    I agree with Deborah although I'm not an expert..enjoyed this poem...INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:28:00 PM

    TLee..."Venus and Mars"...lol ...bless their hearts hun, they just cant help it...keep trying....sometimes new battle battle plans work wonders ;) big hugs,love ~deb love the write

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/27/2012 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When in doubt ask should be the moto of both Venus and Mars. The heck with this guessing foolishness. Thanks Deb glad you enjoyed this. May the warmth of love make a home in your life. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:16:00 PM

    Smile ~ What If I Said That You Were Beautiful * Would That Tear Us Apart? ~ My Love, Always, John!:) ~

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/27/2012 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John I'll take that as a rhetorical question and chuckle to myself at your taunting banter. ~:) and thanks for the smile. I hope the moonlight of your dreams brings a smile of contentment to your being. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Very well written dear.I enjoyed this much.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/27/2012 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Elliott how ya doin hon. I am so glad you enjoyed this. The I think and guessing game is for the birds. Just ask or tell it like it is. Saves a lot of headaches. May one of lifes smiles find your face and forget to leave. Huggs TLee