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Heavenly Tree

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Heavenly Tree

Ghostlike rage Haunts me…it smothers me… I can’t handle the smell of burning sage It overpowers me…will I EVER be free? Sweltering rage Grasps on to me…it bothers me… I can’t expose my courage on stage It’s horrendous…will you EVER pay the fee? Childlike mirth Reigns upon me…It chases after me... I can’t let loose my youthful imagination, flipping page to page It towers over me…will I EVER joyfully flee? Heavenly birth Recoils from affliction… tracking me down… I can’t shed the grief that lead to rage It pulls me back…will I EVER be a budding tree?

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  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:20:00 PM
    Like this one. Sure can take out your anger and very artfully. Keep writing David. I'll be watching O_________________________o Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Very emotive and expressive work..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara