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The Omega Man

She gazed into the northern sky and said unto herself, there is a storm coming....

They thought him odd; the philosophers and wisemen contemporary within their day

For not only did he abstain from the worlds ways but, he spent decades building a vessel

Warning them all as many simply laughed and mocked; shaking their heads whileas passing by

Just another day like every other day, amid this their sinful lives; trying to somehow imagine

An entire civilization, so immersed within something that I cannot seem to yet fathom; still

As unto how could this truly be that only one and one alone, be they counted worthy....

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....“The Omega Man” *

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 6:03:00 PM

    Awesome one! I really enjoyed this unique and creative verse. Keep writing and posting! <3 Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:54:00 PM

    Thank you always for your comment and mail... they are very delightful.. like this powerful imagery ... have a nice day..xox..pd

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:09:00 PM

    You weave a lovely poem, I sense the hidden message within your words, thanks for your support of my poetry, dear man

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:57:00 AM

    Could be Noah, John. or Jesus Christ himself, the vessel being belief in him. anyhow, wonderful and very powerful message here. harry

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Quite interesting..keep on writing, jag

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 10:28:00 PM

    I thought this was about Noah too! Maybe not.. maybe another version of a Noah? Good write any way it goes. Thanks for sharing :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:19:00 PM

    aww lovley and I love you too John, take care all my love to you from diane, you are and alays will be special to my heart here on poetry soup. xxx

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 4:48:00 PM

    I have a feeling this could be Noah you are speaking of John, is it true? Building a vessel while others mocked him. Perfect! I love the way you tell the story - just enough mystery to keep us guessing ! :)

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Interesting write John...A lot of meditation... Thanks for sharing... Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Well written John, like always. - Have a lovely day. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise