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While I Dreamt

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While I Dreamt

Long hair, coal, coiled
‘Round fingertips, bone white.

O, my diffident lover,
How I waited for that night.

When I held you as you dreamt,
And kissed your quivering lips.

When we bathed in the uncloaked moonlight,
In an everlasting eclipse.

Sky, the blankest façade
Lit by nicks of white.  

I carry you into my dream;
I carry you into the night.

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  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:13:00 AM
    Sweet kiss to this lovely written poem Jessica. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

    VH Avatar Jessica VH
    Date: 4/26/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =) Thanks!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Very lovely poe ˜ After viewing its moment I was reflecting upon these quivering lips that your beauty mentioned and thinking back unto my ex and how that in her love and meekness her lips used to sometimes quiver ˜ Makes ones heart melt with the beauty found amid such ˜ Not many things more beautiful than a precious heart ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜

    VH Avatar Jessica VH
    Date: 4/26/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading!