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Nature's Ornaments

                      

                                                  sweet gumballs plummet
                                                  to earth from the canopy
                                                     christmas ornaments

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Again, a wonder! I'll have to stop for tonight... taken together, they've all been a 'heavy' meal... sleep on them... Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/29/2012 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ok love Thank you for your patronage and may the sand man bring only dreams that make you smile. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:24:00 PM

    This is a GOOD haiku.For some technical reason I cannot open my Soupmails.I will reply you later when I will be able to open them.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/26/2012 1:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not a problem I will keep checking my soup mail. It will probably be tomorrow as I need to go to sleep. It is after 3:30 am here.
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 10:41:00 PM

    Charlie is helping me and I think he and Debbie do joint programs on Facebook. I am so glad that you like my work which in time with Charlie's help I hope will improve. Thanks for taking time to review my work. May a love for life light your way. Lots of Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:58:00 PM

    "Sweeet" ;) very nicely done Terry...well done!! I still don't do a lot of Haiku...but Russell Sivey here on the soup does a great deal...check out some of his and Debbie Guzzi does all forms fantastic...keep writing sweetie...awsome job...big hugs,love deb

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/25/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for taking the time to review my work. Charlie is helping me and I think he and Debbie have some kind of class on Facebook. I hope with his help that I will write better Haiku. Lots of huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 8:15:00 PM

    Sweet poem here Terry!!

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/25/2012 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am in the process of learning how to properly write Haiku and other styles here. If you would like to read one that has more to it & hummor try my poems - Vexation at the beginning of my list or the poem AWE SHUCKS. Thanks for review. Huggs TLee