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God's Kind of Poetry

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God's Kind of Poetry

O ever changing sky, blue-gray and maudlin
your mood and unsettled ways, meld with mine.
Clouds seem but blemishes upon horizons
as weary as the soot smudged cheeks of urchins.
Bruised in hues at once fresh with pain and longing,
not yet healed by the riper rise of next day’s bloom.

O ever changing sky, the nascent forest’s buds.
Its lashes linger in the purple poignancy of dusk
and whip thy brow with thrashing maple limbs.
Eyeless vault of heaven cry for me, release my plight
erase with thy wonders this tattered visage so forlorn.
The sky of night holds many jewels of delight.

O ever changing sky, clear to crisper shades of sapphire,
ping with shooting stars and glowing diadems of light.
Let lavender blue soften my sorrows for I like Merope* 
need Orion’s might to lift my heartache, to point the way.
May thy constant rebirth give hope which melds with mine
and brings a beauty brighter than your Venus** to the day.



*Merope was Orion’s star crossed lover.
**Venus is the Goddess of Love and the Morning Star

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  1. Date: 10/17/2014 11:22:00 PM
    Wow this is so heavenly Debbie! Ur unique way of writing I highly adore!Congrats on huge win!

  1. Date: 10/17/2014 10:15:00 PM
    wow, this is a gorgeous one, POET!! Congrats on a well deserved win. I love when you write this way.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 11:09:00 PM
    Such beauty lies in the heavens. Congratulations on your win Debbie.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 9:41:00 PM
    Congratulations with love and prayers, Gina

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 7:29:00 PM
    He melds well with you, and you carry his image well, congrats on your win Debbie, nice to see you on the winning list xxx

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 6:17:00 PM
    I faved this poem. If we all took that extra second to fav the best poetry on the site the lists here would be more reflective of the great poets here.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 6:06:00 PM
    I am not speaking for anyone else but in what universe does my write sit above this incredible poem. I am a fair man I never make comments I don't mean. I am as fair to me as I would be to you. CONGRATULATIONS on this excellent poem winning. Lots of Love.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 10:59:00 AM
    Another great win, Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 8:08:00 AM
    It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Debbie.

  1. Date: 10/16/2014 6:14:00 AM
    Nicely worded poem, Deb, congrats on the win

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 8:33:00 AM
    I like this. I have to close my eyes to 'see' it all. Have you seen Indescribable? If not, you need to, it will blow your mind! God Bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:54:00 AM
    thanks for entering Debbie, congrats on your second place win

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Lightfoot" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:47:00 AM
    Beuatifully written. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win and all your wins!!! lol! Great job!! big hugs, love ya , deb

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:26:00 AM
    congrats on your win Debbie

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Your poems, so often read like those from great poets of yesteryear....the ones who live on and on...another amazing write!

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 1:49:00 PM
    BEAUTIFUL!! And I just love the way you provided us with some education as well. Wishing you big time success in Francine's contest! Love you, Deb. Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 1:13:00 AM
    hey Deb, just love this, it has a classical air about it, good luck, and thanks for the advice on my sonnet, I did change it...David

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:29:00 PM
    Wow!This is amazing.Love the imagery here.I have to check the Pastoral form.Best wishes to you and HUGGS.

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