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love from begining to end

dreaming messmerized hypnotised idealized illusions. imagination illumination sophistication idealistic determination. sadistic seduction illogical distruction. delusion seclusions confusions intrusion. insignificant insecure isolations instigations. deceptive demeanor defective delight fury rage scorned fight

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 1:29:00 AM

    aww that is verry wel written, and thanks for your kind comments on my devine fotle, yes people ned to know god is our friend and he calls us as his own, God bles from diane

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:48:00 PM

    this is what most people's love seems like to me! lol <3

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:47:00 PM

    Wow! a great assortment of words that go from positive to negative and end up at the bottom. So neat John, Love the way you formed this and it must have been a bit of work to think it through! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 4:30:00 PM

    And indifference after all that... Love is such a mess sometimes. A very dynamic and capacious image of love. An excellent work!

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Wow...you summed up volatile love. Excellent write!

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Complete turn around in this love..This one could be one of those where start with one word and it changes from one thing to another like start with love then ends with hate...I will have to look that form up and come back and tell you what it is...Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for the reassurance that my work will make a good entry..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 5/21/2012 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, The form is diamante...Sara
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 2:47:00 PM

    wow thats good and thanks John for your feed back on my poem why i like to smile.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 10:58:00 PM

    wow great descriptions! keeps a body guessing, :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 3:02:00 PM

    I do like happy endings

    Puddifoot Avatar Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 5/18/2012 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I can see I have a lot of catching up to do, you have been busy in my absence :-)
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Amazing assorment of words John and every one spelled right! :) I love the way this draws me in with all the emotion you express so well.

    wesley Avatar elizabeth wesley Date: 5/7/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    assortment is what I meant to say; we can't all be perfect - haha
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 3:41:00 PM

    Dear John, happy belated birthday! I'm so sorrry I missed it earlier. Thanks for stopping by my work. Love and blessings always, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Belated Happy B-day, John! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Wow! Talk about bad experiences with love. Guess we've all had some bad luck in love, but I find this poem captivating. The dreams represent our hopes and imagination is what it took for you to write this gem, John. Happy Birthday, my friend. I wish we could stay in touch more. Love you, Carolyn

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 4/26/2012 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i don't know you were a "missing person" for a while
    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 4/26/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    all you got to do is call.
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:56:00 PM

    John, i love the way it all ends... wow... love it... truly... this dazzled me ... maybe cause this is true and lives up to most realities... enjoyed..pd

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 4/26/2012 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the truth hurts
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 3:40:00 PM

    yes, black is sleep, but for me, green or blue would be peace. Black is also evil and deep depression. Just like blue has the bad connotation of the "blue's" but also it's the sky and sea of nature! I notice you put "i don't know" for t his one. It reminds me of that one type of poetry I think called Tetracyts" or something like that. YOu could mold it into that form, John.

    JACKSON Avatar MS.ERICA JACKSON Date: 5/13/2012 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not all black is.."depression"....some black signature "gorgeous."
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 2:36:00 PM

    There is the meat the gravy and then there is dessert, all the ingredients needed for good loving, enjoyed your poem John Loving, have a nice day hugs vie