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when you feel

When you feel like ur fadeing taking 
your last breath speaking 
your last words.....your woes leave 
you ....the pain is 
endless....your being lifted 
...humbled just to be dropped again 
....hold on ...you can't drop..you 
can't fall ....don't give in.....when 
you feel like your love is gone like 
nobody cares...your not being 
dropped..when nobody tells 
you...your voice is your strength to 
get back....the soup to your sick 
heart the letters in ur broil...the 
words spelled out so well....u find 
urself slipping...ru scared yet

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