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Love's Note's

Flames devouring her breast betwixt these fangs as

She cried; virginistic blood, dripping unto the floor....

Quivering for more whileas she squeezed times thighs

To release it's joy; her craving piercing nails; bitten

Carvings of this night; screaming at the silent moon

Ravishing her still framed flesh; in euphoric crimsons....

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...."Loves Notes" *

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Wow! That was intense! Awesome one. Thanks for the kind comments on my work - always uplifting as usual. Thanks. (: Your friend, Laura

    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 6/2/2012 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    2nd read, reads it as non- violent just one'spleasures of a secondary cherry as virgins blood may soon drip, uh... You love note brought me to this poem, I don't know what to say. ttyl, Cindy
    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 6/2/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wanna rastle, you out to see "me box" me box? not me box... I have a monkey, not a box!
    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 6/2/2012 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was told once by someone who cared that when I was mad, these crimson hues of yours to get back in good graces? love you very, very much. I do not like violence yet submiss to what I do not agree to the bloody mess I would tko someone for the attempt thereof, and quite qualified, been there done that, .....~yet faminity tells me, creatively you have expressed yourself wll in this verse, and had all right to be angry enough, love you very, very much, Cindy Lu
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Dear John: Love this! Janice

     Avatar Date: 5/17/2012 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Thank You, 'My Sweeet Beautiful Janice.'" *