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Love's Note's

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Love's Note's

Flames devouring her breast betwixt these fangs as

She cried; virginistic blood, dripping unto the floor....

Quivering for more whileas she squeezed times thighs

To release it's joy; her craving piercing nails; bitten

Carvings of this night; screaming at the silent moon

Ravishing her still framed flesh; in euphoric crimsons....

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...."Loves Notes" *

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Wow! That was intense! Awesome one. Thanks for the kind comments on my work - always uplifting as usual. Thanks. (: Your friend, Laura

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Dear John: Love this! Janice

     Avatar Date: 5/17/2012 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Thank You, 'My Sweeet Beautiful Janice.'" *