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Clumsy

Shards of glass scatter,

reflecting light explodes,

attention catches quickly,

clumsiness exposed!


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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 3:39:00 PM

    this is excellent Katie, enjoyed. harry

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 3:05:00 PM

    you've nailed it in this succinct but very very good poem!

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Been there and done that more than once in my life..I have those days that start of dropping things or bumping into things that last all day and I just hate it..Enjoyed reading your great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments give my spirit an uplifting moment..Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Yeah, I could definitely picture this happening Katie :) lovely imagery

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Well done and funny to - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:31:00 PM

    Dear Katie I love this. You've succinctly painted a picture of clumsiness with no clumsiness at all. Kathy