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Dedicated to you

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Dedicated to you

You know I love you so much, so much so that it aches,
Yet I love you so, I just give what it takes,
Sometimes I do wild things, just to play rebel to the wife,
Yet deep down I know, it is you, who lights up my life.
Just To stay by me, I know you gave given up more than I can ever give,
I cannot forget that for a day, a moment, not a single second that I live,
You are my world, my dreams, my strength, my hopes, my gain,
You are my peace, my song, my antidote to pain,
You are the music, in my every breath the sweet sound,
You are the fundamental force that makes my little world go round,
This I cannot finish writing, yet I am forced to send,
For  this is the story of my love for you, and it will Never end…
Love you , more..
Each day..
Each second..
Yesterday..
Today..
Now..
Tomorrow..
Forever..

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  1. Date: 5/20/2012 12:37:00 PM
    LOVELY!!laced with subdued passion but very nicely potrayed... keep up the good work!!!!~sashi

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/20/2012 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for taking the time :-) it means a lot to me.
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:02:00 PM
    Oh how I wish you wrote this poem to me,it is breathtaking ,if you don't mined I would pretend its for me,thank you ,Ivy

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/2/2012 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a ton, well i wrote it for my wife< but in another life, its for you :-) love is only bound by the limit of human comprehension.. i love your work, thanks again