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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Awesome story in poetic form....well done!

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:19:00 PM

    An outstanding descriptive write on this poem. You could picture this scene as if in a movie. Well done-I enjoyed it. love phyl

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Phyllis
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:49:00 AM

    wow, this is really enthralling, BB. I just love how you made a twist out of it!! It would make a really great idea for a novel. So you could develop it more fully. It's too bad this one has been overlooked at Soup, but I foresee a future win, and hopefully more people will read it on the winners' list!

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/29/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea