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Written by: Tim B  Send Soup Mail  
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Heart of Mine

A dangerous job Shafted as hearts collapse in Into energy bleed

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  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:01:00 PM

    Interesting Haiku..Soup Mail for you soon..Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:48:00 PM

    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Tim. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 9:53:00 PM

    Why, Thank you Tim.. falling is very easy.. finding a bandage big enough to cover up the dangerous job..is the hard part. Energy and life will always flow like like undying blood... a wonderful instrument we have... called "HEART!" a very interesting haiku... thank you always.. xox.... LINDA...

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 4:44:00 AM

    Well put together Tim, nice selection of words to capture the devastation of a broken heart. Hope it's not yours.

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 10:45:00 PM

    Well written friend....