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Penchant of a Pensive Poetess

Relieve me of this cruel
Subterranean passion
Or douse dispiriting reason
Cast out the angst
Heart distressed
Regain your soothing rhythm

Return to me
Resilience
Revoke this grim oppression
Please recall
Lost resolve
Compel its requisition

Don’t consign me to
Nor evoke malign surrender
Be wise, heart of mine
For luring wind songs
Are the primary cause
Of many a heart’s demise

Camille Rose Castillo 2012



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  1. Date: 4/21/2012 4:51:00 PM

    I am glad I stop for your poem today....well done Camille. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Castillo Avatar Camille Rose Castillo Date: 5/26/2012 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, for taking the time to comment. I apologize for the late response! Camille
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 3:14:00 PM

    My breath is taken away ! What lovely words and poetry !

    Castillo Avatar Camille Rose Castillo Date: 4/21/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nigel, for your lovely review. :) Camille