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Rhymes in Pick Up Lines 2

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Rhymes in Pick Up Lines 2

I wanna be with you and to know what's new am sure your spots are just a few and your positives, tantalizing like hot stew. Just as I begin my day with brew you bring about the morning sunshine like the dew I'm already having a strong conviction like the jew that our immeasurable Love would be bounded by something much more than a screw.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Will be back to read more, skipped around a bit and enjoyed what I've seen. Must say, your first post, the one about youthful erotica leaves one a bit breathless. The pickup line series is very funny. Thanks for sharing, John

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    Date: 6/11/2012 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks John